Adventures of a Demon Slut

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Your display name should be at least 2 characters long. At Kobo, we try to ensure that published reviews do not contain rude or profane language, spoilers, or any of our reviewer's personal information. She wiped her tears away and looked up…next to her stood Mizuki-sensei. In the background, Iruka and the Sandaime stood next to each other and looked at Naruko and Mizuki with a frown on their faces. Maybe I can have a little fun with her later, before I kill her.

Naruko looked warily at him. A nd I know that Iruka-nii is only doing his job and couldn't let me pass. But what's his point in that? Something isn't right with him and Naruko could feel it. You both don't have parents. Mizuki smiled brightly with hidden evil in his smile, but Naruko doesn't notice it anymore. Slowly I begin to worry about you Naru-chan. You didn't wait for me here, like we arranged it. I hope you are alright…And wasn't Mizuki by your side the last time I saw you?

Has he something to do with that? No Mizuki wouldn't…' Irukas thoughts were interrupted by a bang on his door. The Scroll of Seals?! Something isn't right here…' He looked at Mizuki's back suspiciously. Naruko sat on the ground and read the scroll of seals. Mmhh…a jutsu I'm already not good at? Depending on its use…It will be a major disaster if it's taken out of the village!

Iruka and Mizuki arrived by the Hokage. Iruka searched through the whole village to find Naruko. But he couldn't find her. And why did you take the scroll? That didn't look like you… Something is obviously not right!

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I will find you! Mizuki is on the way to his meeting place, where he will find Naruko. He laughed evilly and manically. And then the scroll of sealing will be mine too. His eyes gleamed with mischief. Naruko laid utterly exhausted on the ground. She panted hard and looked like she was training for several hours. Suddenly a shadow formed above her. An angry and concerned Iruka arrived. Naruko sat up and looked pleased at Iruka-sensei.

Until she became this dirty and exhausted? You're going to let me graduate if I'm doing so, right? Isn't it true that I can graduate if I can do one jutsu written down here?

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Iruka looked at her completely shocked, his suspicion became clear. Naruko looked at him confused. He told me about this scroll and place…but you know that, right? Iruka narrowed his eyes. So, my suspicion was right! Suddenly kunai flew her way. Iruka pushed her aside and took the hits and because of that was pinned against a wall of a little cabin. Naruko was shocked to see her Iruka-nii wounded and bleeding.


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Mizuki used you in order to get it for himself! Don't listen to Iruka-sensei. He is only afraid of you holding that scroll! I know you are smarter than you let everybody know and I know you are strong! Probably stronger than everyone!

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You are nothing more than a demon whore! Now tears streamed down Naruko's face and over and over again the same thoughts came to her mind: Mizuki walked towards her. I can break her spirit by raping her and all he can do is to watch. He has to go to Naruko now, before Mizuki reaches her. But it was pointless. Now Mizuki reached Naruko. He laid a hand on her shoulder. Naruko looked up and her eyes widened in surprise as she saw Mizuki standing in front of her.

Too fast for her to react, Mizuki grabbed her hands and pinned her with his body to the ground. She struggled, but he was too heavy for her. Mizukis face was only inches away from hers and she could feel his breath on her face. Chills ran down her back and you can see the panic in her eyes. As Iruka saw that Mizuki pinned Naruko down and his face only inches away from hers, something inside of him snapped. He pulled the rest of the kunai out of his body in such speed and in less than a second was beside Mizuki and kicked him with such force that Mizuki crushed through a tree.

He looked down at the frightened Naruko and felt his blood boil. Mizuki stood up and pulled out his big fuma-shuriken. Iruka dashed at Mizuki, but he only grinned and threw his fuma-shuriken at Naruko, who was sitting on the ground still frozen in fear. She opened her eyes only to see Iruka standing above her with blood running down his mouth and the fuma-shuriken sticking out of his back.

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After my parents died, nobody paid attention to me or gave me any support. I wasn't a good student in school. I was the class clown…because I wanted people to notice me. I couldn't get noticed through excellence, so I kept doing stupid things.

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It was so hard. Isn't that right Naruko? Naru-chan didn't kill my parents. She is my precious little sister, who I love so much! She is Uzumaki Naruko from Konoha, not some demon! Naruko furiously kicked the shuriken aside and kicked Mizuki right in the face. Irukas eyes widened in surprise. Mizuki fell hard to the ground and Naruko appeared right in front of him.

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Her blond hair was out of her pigtails, floated behind her in the air and formed hair-like tails. I pay you back a thousand times! His eyes widened in surprise as he saw over a thousand furious Naruko's appear. And this was the day Mizuki learned an important lesson. Don't mess with furious women. And if the woman is Uzumaki Naruko you should run for your life while you can still walk After Mizuki learned his lesson he was nothing more than a bleeding pulp and newly castrated. Naruko was a little bit embarrassed.

Are you alright Iruka-nii? Iruka gaped in disbelief at the sight of Mizuki and what she had done to him. Don't mess with Naru-chan when she is pissed! Maybe she will surpass all Hokages. The Sandaime walked to them and smiled. She'll be back soon. As she opened her eyes a pleased looking Iruka was in her sight without his hitai-ate.

She then realized his hitai-ate was around her head and her eyes widened in surprise. She let a single tear slip down her face. Iruka wondered what was wrong when suddenly he was crushed into a hug. As he opened his eyes, Naruko's breasts were pressed in his face. I don't want Naru-chan to think that I'm a pervert or something. She took Iruka's arm and dragged him with her. Iruka only sweat dropped and mourned silently at his soon empty wallet. Special thanks to my beta 'StudioDia29', who looked through this chapter and fixed some of my mistakes.

Great first chapter, liked the structure of the chapter however just a little thing is the use of double and single quotation marks to distinguish speech and thought, however that is an easy fix and I look forward to how you progress this story: Thanks for the tip!


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But now, everything is fixed. And by the way, I have a rape warning in the first chapter Oh and this fic isn't rated M for nothing, so if you aren't mature enough to read about something like that, why did you read this chapter in the first place and why did you write a review? You could have just clicked away Your grammar and pacing needs work. You could also work on not putting the anime into written text. Everyone here has seen it, you don't have to rewrite it.

I'm not saying this to be mean. I'm trying to say that you could have spent the time to work on putting Naruko's motivations and inner thoughts in to words. Which you did, but you could have expanded upon them and not have left them as snapshot. Back peddling a bit to your grammar, you seem to have an issue with possessives and plurals.

I don't know if it's just because you're lazy and don't bother, a crazy spell check function on your phone, a sticky keyboard, or that English is your second language. To cite an example you used womans in place of the correct plural women. You also forget to use an apostrophe to show possession. The work shown here is not bad, is actually pretty good all things considered.

With the right proof reader, and a bit of work you could take this story from good to great. Please don't take me for some conceited fool or anything, I just want to offer some advice to help you grow as an author. Seriously, I really do mean all of this in the nicest way possible. Thank you for your constructive criticism.


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I know I have some grammar and spelling issues, but I'm from Germany, so English is not my first language Anyway, this is not an excuse to not check the spelling and grammar twice, I already did that, but I always miss something and I also want to write new chapters, so that means that in the earlier chapter are a few bad mistakes, I overlooked. To what you said about putting more work on Naruko's inner motivation and thoughts: It gets better with every next chapter, I have written.

For example, in chapter I think I have written some good interesting thoughts and did some changes to the anime. This chapter here, is pretty much the first thing I have ever written on fanfiction, so it isn't really good. Also, I already tried to get a Beta-Reader or proof reader, but from the over 20 people I made a request from, no one answered to this day, what I find a bit rude.

I wrote most of them over a month ago, so they could have at least written back saying they're not interested or something like that. Oh, and I don't take you for some conceited fool. You're pretty nice and polite and only give me constructive criticism without curse words or something like that, so I'm grateful for your review. And maybe if you have time or want to, you can get a proof or beta reader of this story. Just say if you're not interested, I will not be mad.

Anyway, have a nice day! I like this fic. Do you think Kimimaro can be added to the harem? If not just not killed? We just have to wait and see how the story will progress. One of the best gender bents of Naruro I have ever read. Keep up the good work! Just In All Stories: Story Story Writer Forum Community.

Everybody knows Naruko's goal: She wants to be the best Hokage ever! But she is still a petty genin. Therefore, she has a long and dangerous path to go, till her dream can become true. But Naruko feels confident and with the help of her friends and protectors, maybe she can fulfil her dream. With that the story begins… 13 years later… Uzumaki Naruko is currently running away from a bunch of Chunins. Somewhere inside the Hokage office… ''Hokage-sama there is a problem. In the academy… Naruko is now tied up so she can't run away. The next day… ''We are now about to begin the graduation test.

Why always that jutsu? Naruko tried not to cry. Two women looked at her with hateful looks on their faces. On the rooftop of a house… Mizuki-sensei and Naruko sat beside each other and looked over Konoha. Iruka opened the door and was shocked to see Mizuki standing in front of him.